The Quiet Revolution of Presence
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5/26/20251 min read
In a world that values productivity over presence and achievement over awareness, the simple act of paying attention has become a radical act. My journey with mindfulness began not on a meditation cushion but in moments of overwhelming emotion when I had no choice but to stop and fully feel what was happening within me.
Poetry, at its essence, is an art form of deep attention. It asks us to slow down, to notice the texture and temperature of experience, to honor the significance of small moments that might otherwise pass unacknowledged. When I write, I enter a state of heightened awareness where nothing is too ordinary to be worthy of contemplation.
This practice of presence gradually extended beyond my writing into everyday life. I began to notice how often I was physically present but mentally elsewhere - planning future conversations, replaying past events, or simply numbing out through endless distraction. The more I wrote about presence, the more I recognized its absence in my daily experience.
One of my poems emerged from this awareness: "Between your question and my answer, / I take a breath. / Between my impulse and my action, / I create space." This tiny intervention - the conscious insertion of awareness between stimulus and response - has transformed my relationships more profoundly than any grand gesture or dramatic change.
What continues to astonish me is how this simple practice ripples outward. When we bring full presence to our own experience, we naturally become more available to others. When we learn to witness ourselves with compassion, we develop a greater capacity to witness others without judgment.
This is the quiet revolution I'm most passionate about - the radical potential of returning, again and again, to the only moment we ever actually have: this one, right here, right now. Not as a spiritual bypass that ignores life's genuine difficulties, but as a grounded engagement with reality as it unfolds, breath by breath.